In my opinion, working in a small is very helpful. I can learn and develop many ideas with my groupmates. It just like we helping each other out to complete the puzzles. I think it is very important to listen what other idea is about, so we can learn and correct it from there.
This essay is way easier than the first one! I ran out of things to type in the the first essay, it just so hard to get to the point, what the authour was trying to tell us.The movie “Sweet Land” is a really romantic one, I just can’t stop myself from writing it. I heard people asserted that the more you write the most mistakes you going to make. It just so many in my head that i want to write it out about this movie. Althought I might make a lot of mistakes, i’ll be happy with the result.
I’m not sure if i had change anything because i’m still lacking in grammars and word choices. It doesn’t mean that Mrs. Marty not a good teacher, it just myself so slow at it. Sometime it kind of scare me because i don’t want to repeat this class. I’m just hoping that i’ll take it faster then this.
channika2606 
You can express yourself so easily through writing,its a good thing.
Yeah but It’s depand on my mood also.
Hello Channika, You are doing very well, do not worry about the mistakes we have in grammar, punctuation or order words.; that is the way to learn and learn is our purpose, don’t you think? Keep practice. Smart people like you never give up.
You are absolutly correct and yeah practice make it perfect 🙂
That were good paragraphs. We all make mistakes, but we MUST learn from our mistakes!!
You right! But i’m alway repeat my mistakes at least twice, in order to learn. I think i’m having a really bad habbit.
You bring up a good point: It is riskier to write more (more sentences = more possible usage errors) but it is how we learn to develop our ideas, express our thoughts more specifically, and try out new vocab and grammatical structures. I applaud your courage. Continue to re-write essays so that each draft is stronger than the previous. That is what will lead to success.